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Thesis statement (govt should give fund
free healthcare from taxes)
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In this paragraph I will give a short brief about taxes and the
concept of the free healthcare through taxes
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Argument 1 (budgeting)
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In this paragraph I will explain how the massive budgeting in other
spending from the country can be allocated into healthcare
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Argument 2 (standardized service from the government to the hospitals
about the free healthcare)
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In the second argument I will explain about the standardization of
the ones who took the free healthcare so there's no separation of service in
other hospitals.
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Argument 3 (healthcare has become increasingly unaffordable)
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In this paragraph I will explain my third argument about the increase
of treatments and medicine are increasing rapidly.
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Counter argument (the ones can't pay taxes shouldn't get the free
healthcare)
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In this paragraph I will explain how this perspective sometimes
occurs and how to negate the effects.
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Conclusion
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I will conclude this essay from the five paragraphs above in this
last paragraph.
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As a fundamental element for everyone's life, health care and the topic related have long been capturing public's attention all the time. A growing number of countries are providing citizens with free health insurance in varying degrees. Apparently, the free medical care policy is widely recognized by the majority of modern society dwellers. However, there are also different voices declaring that it could impact the regular running of the government. i choose to support free healthcare for these reasons:
first up, the budgeting of a government is quite high. approximately 7 by providing free health care, the feeling of well-being of citizens can be remarkably fortified, so that the country will be more likely to attract more talents from all over the world. Everyone knows that what is the most precious within one country comes from its intelligent residents, from which it's not difficult to understand that, to some extent, both the country and individual benefit from the free health care system.
next up, the standardized service and medicine that sets the minimum procedure for this is controlled by the government. before the BPJS era in Indonesia for example. most hospitals that was surveyed is treating differently depending the method of payment in a hospital whether its big or small. Now days, the methods are controlled and more civilized said some report.
first up, the budgeting of a government is quite high. approximately 7 by providing free health care, the feeling of well-being of citizens can be remarkably fortified, so that the country will be more likely to attract more talents from all over the world. Everyone knows that what is the most precious within one country comes from its intelligent residents, from which it's not difficult to understand that, to some extent, both the country and individual benefit from the free health care system.
next up, the standardized service and medicine that sets the minimum procedure for this is controlled by the government. before the BPJS era in Indonesia for example. most hospitals that was surveyed is treating differently depending the method of payment in a hospital whether its big or small. Now days, the methods are controlled and more civilized said some report.
third one is the healthcare pricing are increasing in the most spectacular way possible. not only prescription medicines, doctor's fee is higher today than two years ago. Let's take an example on the doctors fee in RS Mitra Keluarga Bekasi Barat. Four years ago, the doctor's fee was around IDR 250k-400k. Now, the price are almost on seven figures on some treatments.
Although some governments may have encountered some pressure brought by the high costs of the free health care system, the root cause does not lie in the mechanism itself, but the way how they operate the fund. In another word, the managers should tailor their investment strategy to ensure the profit is always able to overweight the deficit caused by inflation.
To sum up, since the application of free health care system is regarded as a considerable indicator which represents the living standard of citizens as well as the humanization of the government policy, it's undeniable that the spreading of the system is unstoppable. What is more important, there is still a long way to go to fit the free health care system to the highly diverse human society.
To sum up, since the application of free health care system is regarded as a considerable indicator which represents the living standard of citizens as well as the humanization of the government policy, it's undeniable that the spreading of the system is unstoppable. What is more important, there is still a long way to go to fit the free health care system to the highly diverse human society.
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